-Good use of location, makes it clear that it's a psychiatrist office. -Music building tension is effective. -Camera being shaky was effective. -Editing for flashbacks was good.
-The titling looked like it was used to fill the time of the film. -Abrupt end is perceived to be confusing but also effective. -Doesn't feel like a short film.
-Excellent use of soundtrack -Interesting effects which help you get inside his mind -Great storyline which had desired creepy effect
-Dialogue in first scene very unclear -Occasional moments of screaming were more funny than scary, but we could still understand the intended effect of these shots
Overall, the story is intriguing and keeps the audience interested throughout. There was a good variety of shot sizes, distances and angles. The only issues that we could see was that some of the shots were shaky and the sound made it difficult to hear the characters at some points. Maybe try using a lapel mic to make dialogue clearer.
-The sound was good at emphasizing the tension - The editing and transitions were effective at building tension - The concept behind hiding the characters identity is good and the filter used to achieve this
-Good use of location, makes it clear that it's a psychiatrist office.
ReplyDelete-Music building tension is effective.
-Camera being shaky was effective.
-Editing for flashbacks was good.
-The titling looked like it was used to fill the time of the film.
-Abrupt end is perceived to be confusing but also effective.
-Doesn't feel like a short film.
-Excellent use of soundtrack
ReplyDelete-Interesting effects which help you get inside his mind
-Great storyline which had desired creepy effect
-Dialogue in first scene very unclear
-Occasional moments of screaming were more funny than scary, but we could still understand the intended effect of these shots
Overall, the story is intriguing and keeps the audience interested throughout. There was a good variety of shot sizes, distances and angles. The only issues that we could see was that some of the shots were shaky and the sound made it difficult to hear the characters at some points. Maybe try using a lapel mic to make dialogue clearer.
ReplyDelete-The sound was good at emphasizing the tension
ReplyDelete- The editing and transitions were effective at building tension
- The concept behind hiding the characters identity is good and the filter used to achieve this
cool, thanks a lot for the comments my friends. - erol
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