In the week when we return from Xmas, can you speak to me about tweaks you should do on this? For eg - sound levels needs altering at the start so the dialogue can be heard, and at the end of the first scene there is no dialogue heard at all when Oscar's character is speaking.
Also - the last shots would benefit from some cropping and stabilising - you could try jump cuts rather than the reverse zoom? These are easy fixes which would get you more marks.
In the week when we return from Xmas, can you speak to me about tweaks you should do on this? For eg - sound levels needs altering at the start so the dialogue can be heard, and at the end of the first scene there is no dialogue heard at all when Oscar's character is speaking.
ReplyDeleteAlso - the last shots would benefit from some cropping and stabilising - you could try jump cuts rather than the reverse zoom? These are easy fixes which would get you more marks.
ReplyDeleteWe will be sure to amend this when we are back. Thanks for the advice.
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