Synopsis of our short film
Our short film is set
in a dark lounge lit by low key lighting. The main two characters will be the
patient and the psychiatrist although the psychiatrist’s identity will remain a
mystery throughout the short film which adds an element of enigma. The main
story line will be about a man who suffers with the symptoms of schizophrenia,
this will haunt him so much that he struggles with everyday life activities. The
audience will be able to sympathise with him due to a number of flashbacks he
has which will help to illustrate his illness.
The man who haunts
him on a daily basis will also be left to the imagination as his identity will
be covered up. This will give an eerie approach to our short film and we
believe this will keep the audience engaged throughout guessing about who this
masked character could be. The psychiatrist will be asking the patient all
sorts of questions about this masked figure who stalks him and whether or not
he is a danger to him. The patient will fall in and out of flash backs about
this character. There will be scenes of how this stalking started and how it
has got progressively worse for him too. The scenes in our short film will show
the progression of disruption caused to this patient. We will use a variety of
different shots to keep the audience involved and also so we can use techniques
like dramatic irony.
We also plan for a
small twist at the end and this is why some character’s identities are being
left to the audience’s imagination. We believe this will create impact and will
help the audience to remember our short film.
This table below was created before our filming but never actually got put onto the blog. It helped us a lot with our organisation whilst filming due to its detail in reference to each shot.
Shot number
|
Shot time (s)
|
Shot type/ angle
|
Action in shot
|
Dialogue / sound / script
|
1
|
5
|
Black screen
|
n/a
|
‘tell me about him’
|
2
|
5
|
Title screen
|
n/a
|
|
3
|
4
|
Close up
|
Tapping of prop on against table (suggests being anxious
|
Patient is heard to be panting heavily in distress
|
4
|
3
|
Over the shoulder shot
|
Patient looking on the floor uninterested
|
Uninterested in conversation/ continues to tap pen
|
5
|
2
|
Close up
|
Shows how tired and sad he is
|
‘I can’t explain’
|
6
|
2
|
Close up of clock
|
Shows how late it is
|
Ticking of clock
|
7
|
5
|
Extreme close up of patient, side angle
|
Character is shown from the side still looking distressed
|
Psychiatrist ‘I want to help you, but you have to want to help
yourself’
|
8
|
4
|
Extreme close up
|
Heavy staring
|
Hear the faint tapping of the pen and clock ticking
|
9
|
2
|
Close up
|
Pen slowly stops tapping. Then finally stops. Shows how his attention
is drawn to psychiatrist
|
Pen tapping against table
|
10
|
5
|
Extreme close up
|
Patient looking down and upset/ shows extreme emotion
|
High pitched ringing sound (suggests he’s going into a flashback)
|
11
|
5
|
Two shot
|
Shows two characters walking together (one tired and the other
energetic and happy)
|
‘How’s it going why are you so down?’
|
12
|
5
|
Two shot close up
|
Comparison of faces shows how miserable the patient is
|
Patient sighing
|
13
|
6
|
Over the shoulder
|
Shows a dark figure far in the distance behind him
|
Eerie music
|
14
|
6
|
Two shot close up
|
Patient tells friend what he saw
|
‘What! Did you just see that man?’
|
15
|
5
|
Over the shoulder of the two characters
|
When they both turn around to see the dark character is gone
|
‘No, what are you on about? I can’t see anyone mate’
|
16
|
4
|
Close up
|
Character looking shocked, looking anxious, looking side to side or
behind him
|
Gasps in shock, breathing heavy
|
17
|
8
|
Over the should shot / high angle
|
Hiding psychiatrist’s face using lighting adds mystery
|
‘what happened, you haven’t said anything for a while, tell me about
him’
|
18
|
6
|
Medium side shot
|
Patient talking to psychiatrist, although he is struggling to talk
|
‘I’m finding this hard, it’s difficult to describe when its someone
you don’t really know’
|
19
|
7
|
Medium shot pans into a long shot
|
Patient walking at night (second flashback, indicated by fade to
white)
The ‘faceless man’
|
Patter of footsteps
High pitched ringing sound – gives impression of flashback
|
20
|
8
|
Over the shoulder shot / shallow depth of field
|
Reveals faceless man following him; however with use of the camera
when the patient goes to look back he is gone.
|
‘who’s there’ (turning around quickly)
Russel of bushes or patter of footsteps
|
21
|
4
|
Close up
|
Foot tapping as if the patient is agitated
|
Foley sound of shoe tapping
Patient says ‘why is he after me Doctor, why me!’
|
22
|
9
|
Close up
|
Psychiatrist scratches his beard (his tie and part of his lower face
is shown, however none of his main facial features are shown)
|
‘You have to remain calm, I know this is hard but remember you have to
push these bad thoughts out. We have spoken about this before, remember?’
|
23
|
6
|
Close up
|
Tapping of his hands up and down on the table. Shows his watch to show
wealth
|
‘You need to talk to me, is he with us now?’
|
24
|
12
|
Series of different close up shots from different angles (a montage
|
Character gritting teeth looking angry
|
Patient agitatedly grits teeth and growls ‘grrrr’ with anger
|
25
|
5
|
Close up
|
Characters fist clenching with anger
|
The cracking of knuckles
|
26
|
8
|
Over the shoulder shot
|
Shows patient looking anxious trying to explain
|
‘Yeah he is here, you know he’s here’
|
27
|
10
|
High angle just over psychiatrist’s head
|
Psychiatrist shown to be assessing patient, scratching his head and
writing what he says down’
|
‘tell me about other times you’ve seen this man, talk to me’
|
28
|
5
|
Extreme close up
|
Patient looking shocked again
|
High pitched ringing sound again fades in
|
29
|
7
|
Medium shot
|
Shows patient asleep in bed, wakes up dramatically as if he has had a
nightmare
|
Screams ‘argghh’
|
30
|
7
|
POV
|
Shows character wanting to get some fresh air. Opens the curtains and
looks out his window.
|
‘what’
|
31
|
6
|
Over the shoulder shot
|
Shows faceless man looking up at him through the window by the street
lamp.
|
Gasps with shock
|
32
|
5
|
Long shot
|
Shows character closing the curtains quickly
|
Eerie sound with high pitched sound
|
33
|
7
|
Front
on shot of patient
|
This
shows the faceless man behind him in the room
|
Scratching
sound
|
34
|
5
|
Over
the shoulder shot
|
This
shows how the patient quickly turns around expecting there to be something
there, however he’s gone.
|
High
pitched sound
|
35
|
6
|
Side
profile shot / ecu
|
Shows
character engaging more with the psychiatrist
|
‘I
am insane Doctor or is this actually happening to me, its pissing me off’
|
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